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@gnprice gnprice commented Jun 18, 2022

These drop the developer-facing jargon term "realm"; connect the dots
a bit more on what you as the user might actually choose to do that
the app would need these permissions to do for you; and fit into the
syntactic shape that Apple requests in its UI guidelines:
https://developer.apple.com/design/human-interface-guidelines/patterns/accessing-private-data#requesting-permission
by being complete sentences ending in periods.

Fixes: #4139

These drop the developer-facing jargon term "realm"; connect the dots
a bit more on what you as the user might actually choose to do that
the app would need these permissions to do for you; and fit into the
syntactic shape that Apple requests in its UI guidelines:
  https://developer.apple.com/design/human-interface-guidelines/patterns/accessing-private-data#requesting-permission
by being complete sentences ending in periods.

Fixes: zulip#4139
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gnprice commented Jun 18, 2022

Quoting for convenience the three revised strings:

By allowing camera access, you can take photos and send them in Zulip messages.

Choose photos from your library and send them in Zulip messages.

Save photos you choose from Zulip to your photo library.

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Thanks, LGTM! Merged.

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