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4 changes: 4 additions & 0 deletions dashboard/dashboard-cluster-info.md
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Expand Up @@ -86,3 +86,7 @@ The list includes the following information:
- Disk Capacity: The total space of the disk on the host on which the instance is running.
- Disk Usage: The space usage of the disk on the host on which the instance is running.
- Instance: The instance running on this host.

> **Note:**
>
> The Disk list won't be able to show disk related information for some hosts depending on the component type, partition configuration and deployment method. In these cases a yellow warning sign with an exclamation mark (⚠️) will be shown and a mouse over tooltip of "Failed to get host information" is also shown. This is normal behaviour.

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Thanks for adding this helpful note. To improve clarity and align with the documentation style guide, I suggest a few changes:123

  • The phrasing can be more direct and concise.
  • The sentences use passive voice and future tense. It's better to use active voice (or simple present passive) and address the user directly (you).
  • There's a minor spelling inconsistency (behaviour vs. behavior).

Here is a revised version that applies these suggestions:

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> The Disk list won't be able to show disk related information for some hosts depending on the component type, partition configuration and deployment method. In these cases a yellow warning sign with an exclamation mark (⚠️) will be shown and a mouse over tooltip of "Failed to get host information" is also shown. This is normal behaviour.
> The Disk list might not show disk information for some hosts, depending on the component type, partition configuration, and deployment method. In these cases, a yellow warning icon (⚠️) is displayed. If you hover over the icon, a tooltip with the message "Failed to get host information" appears. This is expected behavior.

Style Guide References

Footnotes

  1. The documentation should be clear, simple, and readable.

  2. The style guide recommends writing in the second person ('you') and using the present tense.

  3. The style guide advises against overusing the passive voice.