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Author: ajhuh-mdb

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/in-use-encryption.txt

@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@ replica set or sharded cluster to use this connection option. Your replica set
 can be a single node or larger. 
 
 The :guilabel:`In-Use Encryption` connection tab allows you to connect your
-deployments using :v6.0:`Queryable Encryption </core/queryable-encryption/>`.
+deployments with :v6.0:`Queryable Encryption </core/queryable-encryption/>`.
 
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source/connect/advanced-connection-options/ssh-connection.txt

@@ -12,8 +12,8 @@ Proxy / SSH Tunnel Connection Tab
    :depth: 1
    :class: singlecol
 
-The :guilabel:`Proxy / SSH Tunnel` tab allows you to connect to your deployment using 
-a Proxy method or SSH Tunnel. 
+The :guilabel:`Proxy / SSH Tunnel` tab allows you to connect to your deployment 
+ with a proxy method or SSH tunnel. 
 
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source/connect/advanced-connection-options/tls-ssl-connection.txt

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ TLS / SSL Connection Tab
    :depth: 1
    :class: singlecol
 
-The :guilabel:`TLS / SSL` tab allows you to connect deployments using TLS / SSL.
+The :guilabel:`TLS / SSL` tab allows you to connect deployments with TLS / SSL.
 For more information on :guilabel:`TLS / SSL`, see :manual:`TLS Options 
 </reference/connection-string/#tls-options>`