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source/connect.txt

@@ -84,8 +84,8 @@ on GitHub.
 
 .. include:: /includes/steps/starting-compass-paste-string.rst
 
-Connecting with Compass from the Command Line
----------------------------------------------
+Connect to Compass from the Command Line
+----------------------------------------
 
 .. include:: /includes/intro-command-line-connection.rst
 

source/connect/advanced-connection-options.txt

@@ -18,19 +18,19 @@ Options
 -------
 
 :ref:`general-connection-tab`
-  Learn how to select a Connection String Scheme for your deployment. 
+  Learn how to select a connection string scheme for your deployment. 
 
 :ref:`authentication-connection-tab`
-  Learn how to connect deployments that require authentication.
+  Learn how to connect your deployments that require authentication.
 
 :ref:`tls-ssl-tab`
-  Learn how to connect deployments using TLS/SSL. 
+  Learn how to connect your deployments with TLS/SSL. 
 
 :ref:`ssh-connection`
-  Learn how to connect deployments using an SSH tunnel.
+  Learn how to connect your deployments with a proxy method or SSH tunnel.
 
 :ref:`in-use-encryption-tab`
-  Learn how to connect deployments using In-Use Encryption.
+  Learn how to connect your deployments with Queryable Encryption.
 
 :ref:`advanced-connection-tab`
   Learn about additional advanced connection options for your deployments. 

source/connect/advanced-connection-options/general-connection.txt

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ Procedure
       .. procedure::
          :style: connected
 
-         .. step:: Select a Connection String Scheme.
+         .. step:: Select a connection string scheme.
 
             You can select one of the following options:
 

source/includes/intro-advanced-connection-options.rst

@@ -1,3 +1,3 @@
-The Advanced Connection Options provide additional forms of connecting Compass 
+The advanced connection options provide additional ways to connect Compass 
 to MongoDB. Advanced connection options allow you to specify authentication, 
 TLS/SSL, and SSH to securely connect to your deployment.