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Adjusting onboarding copy for better readability #16570

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adjusting copy for better readability
selfcontained Feb 24, 2023
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addressing some review feedback
selfcontained Feb 27, 2023
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24 changes: 7 additions & 17 deletions components/dashboard/src/onboarding/StepOrgInfo.tsx
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Expand Up @@ -150,11 +150,6 @@ export const StepOrgInfo: FC<Props> = ({ user, onComplete }) => {
}
setJobRole(val);
}}
hint={
jobRole !== JOB_ROLE_OTHER
? "Please select the role that best describes the type of work you'll use Gitpod for"
: ""
}
error={jobRoleError.message}
onBlur={jobRoleError.onBlur}
>
Expand All @@ -166,16 +161,7 @@ export const StepOrgInfo: FC<Props> = ({ user, onComplete }) => {
</SelectInputField>

{jobRole === JOB_ROLE_OTHER && (
<TextInputField
value={jobRoleOther}
onChange={setJobRoleOther}
placeholder="Please specify"
hint={
jobRole === JOB_ROLE_OTHER
? "Please select the role that best describes the type of work you'll use Gitpod for"
: ""
}
/>
<TextInputField value={jobRoleOther} onChange={setJobRoleOther} placeholder="Please share (optional)" />
)}

<TextInputField
Expand Down Expand Up @@ -205,7 +191,7 @@ export const StepOrgInfo: FC<Props> = ({ user, onComplete }) => {
))}
</CheckboxInputField>

<CheckboxInputField label="I'm signing up for Gitpod to...">
<CheckboxInputField label="I'm signing up for Gitpod for...">
{signupGoalsOptions.map((o) => (
<CheckboxInput
key={o.value}
Expand All @@ -224,7 +210,11 @@ export const StepOrgInfo: FC<Props> = ({ user, onComplete }) => {
</CheckboxInputField>

{signupGoals.includes(SIGNUP_GOALS_OTHER) && (
<TextInputField value={signupGoalsOther} placeholder="Please specify" onChange={setSignupGoalsOther} />
<TextInputField
value={signupGoalsOther}
placeholder="Please share (optional)"
onChange={setSignupGoalsOther}
/>
)}
</OnboardingStep>
);
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4 changes: 2 additions & 2 deletions components/dashboard/src/onboarding/exploration-reasons.ts
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Expand Up @@ -7,10 +7,10 @@
export const getExplorationReasons = () => {
return [
{ value: "explore-professional", label: "For work" },
{ value: "explore-personal", label: "For personal projects, or open-source" },
{ value: "explore-personal", label: "For personal projects or open-source" },
{
value: "replace-remote-dev",
label: "To replace remote/containerized development (VDI, VM based, Docker Desktop,...)",
label: "To replace remote/containerized development (VDI, VM, Docker Desktop)",
},
];
};
12 changes: 6 additions & 6 deletions components/dashboard/src/onboarding/job-roles.ts
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Expand Up @@ -9,13 +9,13 @@ export const JOB_ROLE_OTHER = "other";
export const getJobRoleOptions = () => {
return [
{ value: "", label: "Please select one" },
{ value: "software-eng", label: "Software Engineer" },
{ value: "software-eng", label: "Software Engineering" },
{ value: "data", label: "Data / Analytics" },
{ value: "academics", label: "Academic (Student, Researcher)" },
{ value: "enabling", label: "Enabling team (Platform, Developer Experience)" },
{ value: "team-lead", label: "Team / Function Lead" },
{ value: "academics", label: "Academia (Student, Researcher)" },
{ value: "enabling", label: "Platform or Developer Experience" },
{ value: "team-lead", label: "A Team Lead or Function Lead role" },
{ value: "devrel", label: "DevRel" },
{ value: "product-design", label: "Product (PM, Designer)" },
{ value: JOB_ROLE_OTHER, label: "Other - please specify / prefer not to say" },
{ value: "product-design", label: "Product" },
{ value: JOB_ROLE_OTHER, label: "Other" },
];
};
2 changes: 1 addition & 1 deletion components/dashboard/src/onboarding/signup-goals.ts
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Expand Up @@ -12,6 +12,6 @@ export const getSignupGoalsOptions = () => {
{ value: "onboarding", label: "Faster onboarding" },
{ value: "powerful-resources", label: "More powerful dev resources" },
{ value: "security", label: "More secure dev process" },
{ value: SIGNUP_GOALS_OTHER, label: "Other - please specify / prefer not to say" },
{ value: SIGNUP_GOALS_OTHER, label: "Other" },
];
};