Adjusting onboarding copy for better readability #16570
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started the job as gitpod-build-bmh-onboarding-copy-updates.1 because the annotations in the pull request description changed |
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| @@ -169,7 +169,7 @@ export const StepOrgInfo: FC<Props> = ({ user, onComplete }) => { | |||
| <TextInputField | |||
| value={jobRoleOther} | |||
| onChange={setJobRoleOther} | |||
| placeholder="Please specify" | |||
| placeholder="Please share (optional)" | |||
| hint={ | |||
| jobRole === JOB_ROLE_OTHER | |||
| ? "Please select the role that best describes the type of work you'll use Gitpod for" | |||
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Suggestion (non-blocking): I'd suggest to remove this help text, as I don't see what additional context it provides a user.
If we do decide to keep, I'd suggest to remove the "work you'll use Gitpod for", part as:
- User likely doesn't really know what Gitpod is
- We have the other field later on for the purpose
| ? "Please select the role that best describes the type of work you'll use Gitpod for" | |
| ? "Please select the role which best describes your profession" |
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Good point, I'll drop the hint completely from this.
| { value: "team-lead", label: "Team / Function Lead" }, | ||
| { value: "academics", label: "Academia (Student, Researcher)" }, | ||
| { value: "enabling", label: "Platform or Developer Experience" }, | ||
| { value: "team-lead", label: "A Team or Function Lead role" }, |
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Suggestion(non-blocking): Could we add "lead" after team lead? I noticed some people submitted "team lead" in other, but did not notice here, my theory is because we say "team / function lead" so on scanning "team lead" does not appear.
| { value: "team-lead", label: "A Team or Function Lead role" }, | |
| { value: "team-lead", label: "A Team Lead or Function Lead role" }, |
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Description
Adjusting some of the copy on the final step of onboarding to help readability.
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