Incorporates edits from copy review.

Co-authored-by: kanchana-mongodb <[email protected]>

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source/includes/options-k8s-shared.yaml

@@ -1257,27 +1257,24 @@ optional: true
 description: |
   *New in MongoDB version 4.2.*
 
-  Prevents a MongoDB server running with TLS from accepting incoming connections 
-  that use a specific protocol or protocols. To specify multiple protocols, use 
-  a comma separated list of protocols.
+  Prevents a MongoDB server running with |tls| from accepting incoming connections 
+  that use a specific protocol or protocols. To specify multiple protocols, enter 
+  a comma separated list of protocols. For example, ``TLS1_0,TLS1_1``.
   
   This setting recognizes the following protocols: ``TLS1_0``, ``TLS1_1``, ``TLS1_2``, 
-  and starting in MongoDB 4.0.4 (and 3.6.9), ``TLS1_3``.
+  and starting in MongoDB 4.0.4 (and 3.6.9), ``TLS1_3``. If you specify an unrecognized protocol, the 
+  server won't start.
 
-  On macOS, you cannot disable ``TLS1_1`` and leave both ``TLS1_0`` and ``TLS1_2`` enabled. 
-  You must disable at least one of the other two, for example, ``TLS1_0,TLS1_1``.
-
-  To list multiple protocols, specify as a comma separated list. 
-  For example, ``TLS1_0,TLS1_1``.
-
-  Specifying an unrecognized protocol will prevent the server from starting.
-
-  The specified disabled protocols overrides any default disabled protocols.
+  On macOS, you can't disable ``TLS1_1`` and enable both ``TLS1_0`` and ``TLS1_2``. 
+  You must disable at least ``TLS1_0`` or ``TLS1_2`` also. For example, ``TLS1_0,TLS1_1`` 
+  disables ``TLS1_2`` on macOS. 
+  
+  The list of protocols that you disable replaces the default list of disabled protocols.
 
-  Starting in MongoDB version 4.0, MongoDB disables the use of TLS 1.0 if TLS 1.1+ 
-  is available on the system. To enable the disabled TLS 1.0, specify ``none`` to 
+  Starting in MongoDB version 4.0, MongoDB disables the use of |tls| 1.0 if |tls| 1.1+ 
+  is available on the system. To enable the disabled |tls| 1.0, specify ``none`` as the value for  
   :setting:`spec.additionalMongodConfig.net.tls.disabledProtocols`. 
-  See :manual:`Disable TLS 1.0 </release-notes/4.0/#disable-tls-1.0>`.
+  To learn more about this setting, see :manual:`Disable TLS 1.0 </release-notes/4.0/#disable-tls-1.0>`.
 
   Members of replica sets and sharded clusters must speak at least one protocol in common.