DOCSP-23343 Improve Atlas Connection String Example (#272)

* DOCSP-23343 Improve Atlas Connection String Example

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Author: ajhuh-mdb

source/connecting/atlas-to-atlas.txt

@@ -53,5 +53,4 @@ Limitations
 Example
 -------
 
-.. include:: /includes/example-connect
-
+.. include:: /includes/example-connect-atlas.rst

source/connecting/onprem-to-atlas.txt

@@ -61,5 +61,4 @@ Limitations
 Example
 -------
 
-.. include:: /includes/example-connect
-
+.. include:: /includes/example-connect-onprem-atlas.rst

source/includes/example-connect-atlas.rst

@@ -0,0 +1,50 @@
+Gather Connection Information
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+The source cluster, ``cluster0``, is hosted on the following servers
+and ports:
+
+- clusterOne-shard-00-00.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+- clusterOne-shard-00-01.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+- clusterOne-shard-00-02.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+
+The destination cluster, ``cluster1``, is hosted on the following
+servers and ports:
+
+- clusterTwo-shard-00-00.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+- clusterTwo-shard-00-01.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+- clusterTwo-shard-00-02.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+
+There is an administrative user, ``clusterAdmin`` configured on each
+cluster with password, ``superSecret``.
+
+Connect the Source and Destination Clusters with ``mongosync``
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+Use the connection information you gathered to create the connection
+strings for ``cluster0`` and ``cluster1``:
+
+.. code-block:: shell
+
+   cluster0:
+   mongodb+srv://clusterAdmin:[email protected]
+   cluster1:
+   mongodb+srv://clusterAdmin:[email protected]
+
+.. note:: 
+    
+   Atlas clusters require TLS connections. To use ``mongosync`` with Atlas 
+   clusters, add the :urioption:`tls=true <tls>` option or use the 
+   ``mongodb+srv`` connection string format. For more details about 
+   ``mongodb+srv`` connection strings, see :ref:`connections-dns-seedlist`.
+
+
+The ``mongosync`` command layout below is modified for display. To
+connect ``cluster0`` to ``cluster1`` with ``mongosync``, enter the
+following command on one line:
+
+.. code-block:: shell
+
+   mongosync \
+         --cluster0 "mongodb+srv://clusterAdmin:[email protected]" \
+         --cluster1 "mongodb+srv://clusterAdmin:[email protected]"

source/includes/example-connect-onprem-atlas.rst

@@ -0,0 +1,50 @@
+Gather Connection Information
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+The source cluster, ``cluster0``, is hosted on the following servers
+and ports:
+
+- clusterOne01.fancyCorp.com:20020
+- clusterOne02.fancyCorp.com:20020
+- clusterOne03.fancyCorp.com:20020
+
+The destination cluster, ``cluster1``, is hosted on the following
+servers and ports:
+
+- clusterTwo-shard-00-00.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+- clusterTwo-shard-00-01.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+- clusterTwo-shard-00-02.abc12.mongodb.net:27017
+
+There is an administrative user, ``clusterAdmin`` configured on each
+cluster with password, ``superSecret``.
+
+Connect the Source and Destination Clusters with ``mongosync``
+~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
+
+Use the connection information you gathered to create the connection
+strings for ``cluster0`` and ``cluster1``:
+
+.. code-block:: shell
+
+   cluster0:
+   mongodb://clusterAdmin:[email protected]:20020,clusterOne02.fancyCorp.com:20020,clusterOne03.fancyCorp.com:20020
+   cluster1:
+   mongodb+srv://clusterAdmin:[email protected]
+
+.. note:: 
+    
+   Atlas clusters require TLS connections. To use ``mongosync`` with Atlas 
+   clusters, add the :urioption:`tls=true <tls>` option or use the 
+   ``mongodb+srv`` connection string format. For more details about 
+   ``mongodb+srv`` connection strings, see :ref:`connections-dns-seedlist`.
+
+The ``mongosync`` command layout below is modified for display. To
+connect ``cluster0`` to ``cluster1`` with ``mongosync``, enter the
+following command on one line:
+
+.. code-block:: shell
+
+   mongosync \
+         --cluster0 "mongodb://clusterAdmin:[email protected]:20020,clusterOne02.fancyCorp.com:20020,clusterOne03.fancyCorp.com:20020" \
+         --cluster1 "mongodb+srv://clusterAdmin:[email protected]"
+