(DOCSP-44840) Second draft edits to the Billing Data page (#87)

Author: sarahsimpers

source/billing-data.txt

@@ -22,19 +22,19 @@ Billing Data
 
 Tracking and managing cloud spending can be difficult in a large
 organization. While :ref:`cost-saving configurations
-<arch-center-cost-saving-config>` proactively save money, {+service+}
-also provides cloud spend governance tools for you to:
+<arch-center-cost-saving-config>` help you proactively manage spending, 
+{+service+}
+also provides tools for you to view and analyze
+spending. You can:
 
 - Categorize {+service+} resources based on your organization's billing needs.
 - Leverage billing data to visualize and understand your {+service+} spending.
-- Receive notifications when Atlas spending exceeds a specified threshold.
 - Pull billing data programmatically to integrate with your FinOps
   tools for charge-back and accounting purposes within each department
   and application.
 
 On this page, learn how to use built-in {+service+} tools and
-{+service+} billing data to track, manage, and optimize your cloud
-spending.
+{+service+} billing data to track your cloud spending.
 
 {+service+} Features for Billing Data
 -------------------------------------
@@ -79,6 +79,10 @@ After you configure a paying organization, you pay invoices for the paying
 organization that include a list of charges incurred for all linked
 organizations. To learn more, see :ref:`cross-org-billing`.
 
+After you enable cross-organization billing, you can view linked
+invoices if you have the :authrole:`Organization Billing Admin` role or
+the :authrole:`Organization Owner` role for the paying organization.
+
 Review Your Monthly Cost Visualization
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