Copy review from Sarah

Author: JuliaMongo

source/atlas-cli-changelog.txt

@@ -20,7 +20,8 @@
 Released 14 October 2022
 
 - Fixes internal release tooling.
-- Makes ARM binaries available for installation with ``apt yum`` and ``dnf``.
+- Makes ARM binaries available for installation with ``apt``, ``yum``
+  and ``dnf``.
 - Adds support for Debian 11.
 
 .. _atlas-cli-1.2.0:
@@ -34,16 +35,19 @@ Released 14 October 2022
   prevented printing the command's results.
 - Fixes an issue with the :ref:`atlas-privateEndpoints-azure-interfaces-describe`
   command where the output didn't display correctly.
-- Adds the :ref:`atlas-processes-describe` command.
+- Adds the :ref:`atlas-processes-describe` command, which returns the details
+  for MongoDB process you specify.
 - Drops support for Debian 9.
 - Fixes a bug where inviting users issued an error.
 - Improves help text for the :ref:`atlas-backups-snapshots-create` command.
 - Fixes a bug where login information wasn't stored at early exit while
   asking about project ID and org ID.
-- Adds a command to open the config file in your preferred editor.
-- Adds a :ref:`atlas-backups-restores-watch` command.
+- Adds the :ref:atlas-config-edit` command to open the config file in your
+  preferred editor.
+- Adds a :ref:`atlas-backups-restores-watch` command, which watches for
+  a restore job to complete.
 - Adds the :ref:`atlas-alerts-settings-enable` and :ref:`atlas-alerts-settings-disable`
-  commands.
+  commands, which enable or disable the alert configuration you specify.
 
 .. _atlas-cli-1.1.7: