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Author: mcmorisi

source/includes/usage-examples/sample-app.rb

@@ -4,13 +4,11 @@
   gem 'mongo'
 end
 
-uri = "<connection string URI>"
+uri = "<connection string>"
 
 Mongo::Client.new(uri) do |client|
-  # start-db-coll
   database = client.use('<database name>')
   collection = database[:<collection name>]
-  # end-db-coll
 
   # Start example code here
 

source/includes/usage-examples/write-code-examples.rb

@@ -4,13 +4,11 @@
   gem 'mongo'
 end
 
-uri = "<connection string URI>"
+uri = "<connection string>"
 
 Mongo::Client.new(uri) do |client|
-  # start-db-coll
   database = client.use('sample_restaurants')
   collection = database[:restaurants]
-  # end-db-coll
 
   # start-insert-one
   document = { field_name: '<field value>' }

source/includes/write/delete.rb

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   gem 'mongo'
 end
 
-uri = "<connection string URI>"
+uri = "<connection string>"
 
 Mongo::Client.new(uri) do |client|
   # start-db-coll

source/includes/write/insert.rb

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   gem 'mongo'
 end
 
-uri = "<connection string URI>"
+uri = "<connection string>"
 
 Mongo::Client.new(uri) do |client|
 

source/includes/write/update.rb

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
   gem 'mongo'
 end
 
-uri = "<connection string URI>"
+uri = "<connection string>"
 
 Mongo::Client.new(uri) do |client|
   # start-db-coll

source/write.txt

@@ -43,7 +43,7 @@ can use to write data to MongoDB by using the {+driver-short+}.
 
 To use an example from this page, copy the code example into the :ref:`sample
 application <ruby-write-sample>` or your own application. Be sure to replace all
-placeholders in the code examples, such as ``<connection string URI>``, with the
+placeholders in the code examples, such as ``<connection string>``, with the
 relevant values for your MongoDB deployment.
 
 .. _ruby-write-sample:
@@ -54,7 +54,7 @@ relevant values for your MongoDB deployment.
     :language: ruby
     :copyable:
     :linenos:
-    :emphasize-lines: 15-17
+    :emphasize-lines: 13-15
 
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