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Author: robrichard

spec/Section 7 -- Response.md

@@ -40,8 +40,8 @@ clients, the top level _response map_ must not contain any entries other than
 the three described above.
 
 Note: When `errors` is present in the _response map_, it may be helpful for it
-to appear first when serialized to make it more clear when errors are present in
-a response map during debugging.
+to appear first when serialized to make it more apparent that errors are
+present.
 
 ### Response Stream